i have a dream that one day even the state of missipi, a desert state sweltering with the heat of injustice and oppression will be transformed into an oasis of freedom and justice
what this words means is that this state and others have some rules and they discriminate alot of african america people and what martin luther king wants
that all the people should be treated the same and that they are not different from other people
that all the people should be treated the same and that they are not different from other people
i think thats the dream he had that the people should be treated the same way because no body is different we are all the same and nobody shpuld be discriminated by their skin color they should beknow by what they have inside how they are.
a dream defferered
what happends when you have a broken heart
does it feel empty
like a paper with no words
or a town with no people like a song with no sound
does it have no meaning like a boring book
or a clown with no jokes like a clock with no time
maybe its filled with love and joy like valentines day
or love with no end does it feel like love would never be for you
again.
my poem is about how does it feel when you lose some one you love
and how u think ur heart is when u had love some one special and you lose it
would u think you would love some one like you have love that person
i also wrote this poem because of and expirience i had before when i had a bad love
expirence .
4 comments:
hey man i liked your poem how u could relate to it. thats good how u explained the quote of mlk. man if somone before had spoken up like mlk. maybe it would had made a difference too. but good job on it bro. hey also thanks for commenting my blog man.
i liked your poem. it had a lot of feeling in it. You can be an awesome poet bro. Also I can tell you took MLK's qoute by heart
thanks for the comment
hey ramon i really agree with you i think that your quote and mines are about the same type because its the same that everyone should be treated equal all the time because we are all living together and we have to see each other. like i said because we are all going trough the same thing in school and in the streets.
hey buddy=].. I agree with u we are all equal, i also like that u explain the quotes with short but intresting sentence. AND YEA I CAN RELATE TO UR POEM. IS HARD TO LOSE THE ONE U LOVE BUT IS WORSER WHEN U LOSE THE ONE DATZ LOVES U FOR WHO U ARE..=]
IT TAKES COUTAGE BUT WE LOVE ONCES WILL LOVE AGAIN..=] KEEP UR HEAD UP BUDDY=] && ENJOY THE RIDE=]
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